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Thursday, 9 February 2012

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Tamanna ne zindegi ki godi mein sar rakh ke puchha,
                                     Mein puri kab hungi…
Toh zindegi ne muskurake kaha,
                                 Jo puri ho jaye woh "Tamanna" hi Kya …


PROLOGUE

Travelling alone with this terrible shock was tearing Siddharth apart in his loneliness. Even after all these years, the memory of Samedha evoked a pain in him that was as sharp as ever. No one had ever touched his heart and soul, so deeply as Samedha had and no one ever would again.
What ever Siddharth had seen in the past few hours was flashing through his mind. Her face, her fingers, her expressive eyes, her last words, “I love…”
“Sam, you didn’t even give me a chance to join my hands in front of God and pray for you. And at this point of time I could not even go to you and tell you the truth that I too had cried myself to sleep for nights, missing you more than I would have missed my heart, if it would have been taken from me. I never understood what you wanted to convey me in our first meeting but today your silence spoke to me. And now when I understood you and your words, I don’t have you to express myself. Forgive me Sam.......”
Siddharth tried to imagine Samedha’s pain, when she took her last breath. He was blank. All that was coming to his mind was, he needed to go back home, go back to his life…                                                   
                                                   - to be continued...
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PS:  I wanna thank Renu, for her hard work and invaluable feedback. If you would not have read my each draft again and again then I would have missed the “WOW” factor. And thanks for such a nice Shayari, to start up. 
So I am here by posting my second blog in the honor of Chhoti Maa (Renu).

6 comments:

  1. Nice story. I loved it ........ Keep Writing ...

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  2. Awesome Story... M touched... Can't resist my temptation for the next...

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    1. Nice beginning with the touching shayaree. I am impressed .....and waiting for your next blog. keep it up.

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    2. Now it creating even more curiosity in me... Life is some time very unpredictable to all of us..as here in the story I found how they both met and now the story seems to be something else. Would love to read your next blog dear.Anxiously waiting...Thanks..

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  3. Hello Bilina, very nice blog...nicely written...i was just waiting for tis release and finally i got this to read and share...really a beautiful lovely story spiced up with cool shayaris...
    I donno hw cud u imagine such a luvly n wonderful shayaris which still forces to think n imagine deeply...
    Well done gal...Keep goin on n on n on.....Thnx a lot for such a cool stuff.

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  4. Just wondering what happened exactly ! Interesting !

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